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Hello everyone! Im so sorry I couldnt reply back earlier but I havent been on YWS lately. Now Im back and here to stay ;) Thanks to everyone for making ...

WOW. This is a very beautiful poem! The rhyming was good but the words were even better. Keep it upp x

Anywhere by Evanescence (Y)

Today you were murdered. Fourteen years ago on this very day. It doesn't feel like such a long time has passed. It feels like the police officer was just here ...

I didn't realise I'd already read this poem just last night until I saw the words. I guess what Im trying to say is a good title counts. The words ...

Wow! Well, i hate being such a freaking critic so Im not gonna go deep into what went wrong in your story. All I can say is, keep it up! ...

Okaay, first things first. The opening was not quite effective and by effective, I mean one to pull the reader right in. It was fine up until the point when ...

This is a very beautiful poem! The way every object seems to be doing quite the opposite of what it is supposed to, forms a generally attractive and pleasing concept. ...

My God, i luv this song so much. Great Job! Um...maybe this is 2 much 2 ask but cud u like allow me n ,y band 2 sing it 4 ...

[quote] know that i hurt you, but baby, im sorry, i never meant to hurt you Readers dont really get a sense of meaning here maybe because of the almost ...

Ive Got 2 Books 4 u. Both R AMAZING. The 1st one: Bad Blood by Rhainon Lassiter [hope i spelled her name right :P] It's not about vamps but its ...

Chapter 3 I nod my head twice. My parents are standing beside what could possibly be my death-bed. They murmur words of comfort and reassurance again and again till I ...

Chapter 2 Lights. They’re all around me, surrounding me as if blocking chances of my escape. Why would I escape? A picture [EMMA!] flashes in my mind and I gasp. ...

You need inspiration. Go take a walk outside, refresh your mind, see how the world is working. I find it easy to think up ideas when im outside, watching the ...

Wow. This really is amazing! The ending, especially, was fascinating. At 1st i thought, it was jus a typical boring story bout sum teenage girl with problems but...Whoa! Luved it ...